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A novel with an interesting concept, it's just that the character development is too slow, as if you were defusing a 'bomb' that was confirmed to explode, which would make readers judge this novel badly, Beta Mc, etc. Even though Mc (the stupid one) isn't actually a beta, he's just trying to maintain a rational attitude from where he came from. Despite what he's been through, nothing rational, like I said before, he's just stupid, not a beta. I'll just put off reading it again, because it's too boring, if 'bomb defusing' drags on.
'Nobody likes being cheated on.' It was human nature, but they would do so if the opportunity arose. After all, what Amelia did was not included in the 'Netorare' category, it was more inclined to 'Netorase'(Polyamorous). And in addition to the background of the world it is not a big problem (in my opinion), and instead adds a new flavor to the ero-novel concept (which mostly just takes fmc here and there). So in conclusion, I really love this novel. Ha ha ha.....
I see. A little advice for you, although a little shameless but good for your novel. Make a note at the end of the chapter, so that readers can vote for your novel. Because I see almost all of your works sink to the bottom. It's a shame that no one reads such a good work.
Is this the start of the Infinite Ladder series?
you must add the tags Drama, hurt comfort, romance, and anxiety disorder. I know, you don't like some readers on webnovel (because in webnovel most of them are beta readers). But I think there is a bit of fault with you too, you wrote about someone suffering from Anxiety Syndrome and coitophobia, in the first person perspective, I would suggest writing in the third person perspective. The reason is, not many people enjoy reading Mc's inner thoughts. I suggest you read some on AO3 (if you haven't already). There, many professional writers will motivate you. Also, put your work there, I'm sure your writing will thrive! The readers there are amazing!!
You know, possessiveness is fine. As long as you understand the limits. Example: you may limit the lives of your girls, as long as it's for the convenience of both of you. If it's just for your own convenience, they are nothing more than slaves/robots. And, I didn't see the Romance tag, but I was expecting a relationship development, not PokeWoman.