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God of Light and Justice
Plus, from what Thor said, get stronger the older they are. He said that in Avengers together unbeatable Show.
So I think many of us hoped, that this chapter had something different than what we got. All things considered I had a wonderfull experience till the last 2 chapter,but I must sadly say ,that I have to drop this Fanfic, which is a shame. Becuase it doesnt matter what you do Author, Mc will be Spineless forward, because his reaction and the reaction of Azula isnt right in any capacaty. So I will drop fron here on. Hope you will finish this book for the ones that still read this book.Hope all of you have a good day.
I am going to be honest here author, I really like your story, but that was not only really out of nowhere, but also a kick not only for fans of yours but also Xing. I could write more than that, but please rewrite the chapter. Because I realy want to see more of it, but I just can't do that If you continue that. (You basically NTR`d Him) And almost all of us (The Readers) are just disappointed. I hope really that you read this, because you created one of the best ATLA fics (believe me I searched) and I don't want to be reading if you decide that Ty Lee and Azula become more than friends. That Xing just accepts everything, because of reasons you can think of, or he is just angry, but decides because Azula is so hurt he gives it a chance. I would drop the Fic if that happens, I am Sorry. Have a good day, and please think about it.
No, the most hilarious death in all human's history goes to Chrysippus, a Greek philosopher, who laughed so hard at his own Joke he couldn't breathe anymore and then died because of it.
It wansn't submissivness. If it was he wouldnt talk back to him like he did(if he handn't stand his ground and immediatly falltered in his stand that would be submissive). What it was,was making one of the world's coolest spy look like a fool (like every Fanfic that has Fury in) and talking actually down on him, by making him look like a idiot. Have a great day.
It warms my heart, to see fanfiction that has thoughts on the character and the Story itself. Sadly I can say not much about the Story development, because the moment I am writing this review, the fanfic has 12 Chapters. What I can say is it is without a doubt one of the best-written stories so far on this website. I read fanfictions since around 3 years now and got bored of the Harem/nonharem, Op Protagonist, and stupid Mc Trope. But I drove off my intial review, I apologize. The characters are fleshed out and feel like real people. The Mc itself alredy has changed quite a bit in the universe he lives in, without really doing anything. Regarding the writing quality, I can't say much, because it isnt my first language, but so far it is quite good. Thats it with my review, now comes a personal hope. If the story and the story update rate are consistent so far it is with one chapter per day. It will be one of my favorite fanfictions of all that I have read. I hope all of you have a great day, night and week.
Also, I hope that all of you have a great day or night.
I like this chapter a lot, so thanks for that author, hope you continue the Story and give it a proper ending it deserves.
When you are interested in creating an image try Dawn AI, it's a free-to-use image generator. So you can try and show us how his progress is. Sorry, it sounds like I want to sell it to you. I'm just very interested in seeing the thing you described him as. To all of you have a great day or night.
I actually didn't think of that, because it said in the end of one chapter, that everything will be decided from one simple contract. When All for One and Horizon meet each other. That means in the end, Horizon will still have his quirk because it wouldn't make any sense, that All for One would steal his quirk to only give it back to him. Because, if All for one would get his hands at Horizons power, there wouldn't be any threat to him anymore in any sense. Have a great day or night.
So, let me get this right. Aoyama can only tell, that Horizon got Food bars that allow him to bulk up much faster, and he has such high control over his quirk, that he knows and can control everything that is going on in his body. Also, that taking off his "Life support system" won’t kill him immediately. The only noteworthy things are, that Horizon trains his quirk even in school, and it needs 70 percent of his calorie consumption. While the last one is already taken care of with the bars. Who when a normal person eats kills them. The only thing I can see that All for One is able to do is giving the bars to the public and give horizon the fault for it, when a person dies from them. The reason for that is it has his symbol on the package and the fans will obviously eat what he eats. That would shake their trust for him, which he will obviously not care for, it could also be an opportunity to manipulate the people in thinking, he trains so hard, that he has to eat so much, that would normally kill a person. Sorry for my ranting, just wanted to say that All for One doesn't really get anything from the Information. To all of you, have a great day or night.