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Hanna_Kartoush

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  • Hanna_Kartoush
    Hanna_Kartousha day ago
    Replied to Ak02

    I liked this novel a lot from the world building to the character of the Mc (Cold powerful and fast growing ) and the supporting Characters Eve , Runeth, Abuim, Shadow princess and the 3 kids. I loved the plot line when he changed his destiny and teleported to the Rebirth Fire star. the important thing he is not like the overpowered in every single profession or every single elmantal power he is focused on one and only fire and other supportive elements. After having closure and Avenging his family Harry and Eve Ark and bring havoc on the Divine order and Edhen children organizations . Finches the last of the 6 disasters and leave Edhen world. He would beging his search for the soul green fire in the Undead plane Ark and upgrade to Level 7 Archmage/ level 6 Shape shifter. Then He will go to The Elder High plane bringing the fall of the Evel God's faction aka( Sasha goddessod love and wealth, Professor God's of order and all the others that came to Edhen. ) I don't Know when will enter the Dungeon Star tombs again Level 5th floor with The Star Monarchs Key and get opportunities and power. Will he give that Gint girl the ring whisper of storms. Arc. Best riter don't drop this novel please I already covered to 1500 chapters plots without fillers that is. and I sow that you made a novel about Abuim too I'll try it. The content feels connected i read the titles. Best of wishes. Fire mage novel fan.

  • Hanna_Kartoush
    Hanna_Kartoush3 months ago
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    It is difficult to read for the faint harted and newbies, I read till 1094 it is quite a change of pace for me , it is so fast at first I got caught in a loop, a maze that understood nothing at all from. So ruched so much information and concept jamed together I felt like I'm in an endless word puzzle that nothing made sense. It only get started in the next Arc when the Mc get telported to anther "minor" world 🌎 and everything begins making sense at the end of it . The next Arc we enter an endless nothingness and slumber of the MC where the truth of his bloodline and inherited ability of his father and development of a shadow his shadow in another epic story of a future supreme mage in a supreme mage world, here the writer made an effort at the beginning of its conception it was a nice change in Slowing down and a break from all the bloodshed. but it is discontinued as it reached the next Arcs till it became a memory I don't know why the writer didn't make a divergent path to the MC shadow and send him to the supreme world of mages ( a 7th dimensional world or an 8th guessing as they where the children of the fire that Endrios stole its spark from a primordial of light) it would have been a great side story and a door step to a higher dimension. but that would at least cost more than 500 chapter to construct a visual environment and develop the rhythm to complete the story of the MC. I haven't read any novel were the MC is the most miserable character ever in a novel he died like 5 tims the moment he acquired his bloodlines and more on the way till all hell brook loos on "Doom Star" you enter a maze of an epic proportion and madness it bogel the mind without spoiling the fun. Keep calm and try to have fun reading. thanks for the writer of course and publishers.

  • Hanna_Kartoush
    Hanna_Kartoush8 months ago
    Posted

    Amazing work I just finished it! I wished if it continued discovering new multiverses, finding new limitations and struggles, it could spice things up a bit. I am looking forward to your new novels. Best wishes.

  • Hanna_Kartoush
    Hanna_Kartousha year ago
    Replied to RVN_1998

    Fascinating work and tnx for the map it changes everything.

  • Hanna_Kartoush
    Hanna_Kartousha year ago
    Replied to RVN_1998

    Hi!Can you please post a map of the novel world please??I have at first a good picture about it but in some way or another it is confusing.So from Brown kingdom borders on the side of the Red valley region " Albano kingdom " that also borders Rosser kingdom and further Blackrock kingdom island in sea. Further on the black plain region cost the Rock island.And Black plain borders the waiver kingdom from yellow city further to the flood valley forest. and the Cromwell kingdom from Water city. And assuming North the Snow mountains rang a natural border between brown kingdom and the Snow kingdom after the mountains. the Snow kingdom borders Cromwell kingdom and the kingdom of the End on land and it seems to be it's coast is near Blackrock island. The Cromwell kingdom have a long border with the Waves kingdom and then th northwest with the Brown and Snow further to the kingdom Of the End.And North Cromwell it borders The flaming empire but also the Vogel kingdom.And then I read that Rosser kingdom is between Vogel and flaming empire that also have on its coast from Clowds sect sea border with Blackrock island. What am I mssing?? I don't remember the coast lines of every kingdom but still this north Continent feels weird?I searched Google but there was nothing.