Well, I'm bored... The Fanfic Section has some great reads btw.
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reminds me of GoG1
Just so you know but Loki is Female...
Isn't he still like 7 almost 8?
Roan God of Plumbers...
I just wanna say I'm liking the story so far except I think you should maybe tone down on the over the top descriptions. Like a few chapters ago there were 4 semi paragraphs describing some random topic that wasn't really needed... Just felt like I was reading philosophy and not a novel for awhile.
(May be a little biased because I've read Alot of this author's past work)Chapter 28 at time of postAlright let's start out with the System, it reminds me of a mix between the first "I can make everything level up" and "The Arcane path" if you've read any of this author's past work. While it may be a system it is more of just a status that details his skills and abilities.The story is very well written and I'm not talking only about the grammar. The description that goes into some of the characters seems very thought out.Character Design... My only problem with what I've read so far is that the MC has the attitude of a turtle(Might change cause lil man is 5) but other than that every Character has Alot of depth and aren't Npcs.World Background is pretty good because we have gotten a general history of the world and some recent history.Summary: Yea I'd say it's definitely a good read for what has been released and it seems to have a lot of potential to be great because of the way it is set up.
Just wanted to let ya know that word does not mean what you think it means... Destruction / Extinction would probably work better.