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LunaKindred

LunaKindred

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Jesus can turn water into wine, But i can turn your mother into mine ~Sun Tzu Art of War

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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred9h
    Commented

    Huh... In the end it's going with rias route again and bashing riser, very not inspiratif

    Ch 21 Chapter 21: Boost x Boost
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    Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred11h
    Commented

    Is sukehiro with maki or mei?

    Ch 53 Chapter 31. Yellow brick road (Part 2)
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    JJK: Red Priest Pathway
    Anime & Comics · amattsu
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred11h
    Commented

    Bro, the chapter quantity is really downgrade.. this chapter is too short

    Ch 56 [56]Rating Game 3
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    Ultimate Herrsher in DxD
    Anime & Comics · Shonpufi
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred1d
    Commented

    No... Prinz Eugen 😞

    Ch 128 Chapter 127 - Why Are They Throwing Themselves On Me?
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    Interdimensional Mercenary (SAS 4 Zombie Assault Fanfic)
    Others · Daoist_KittyKat
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred1d
    Commented

    Is this world mixed of p4, p5r, and p5s?

    Ch 83 The Intermission - Goro Akechi.
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    Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
    Video Games · Phantom_Voyage
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred1d
    Commented

    Is he in gow verse or still in the nasu verse?

    Ch 75 [75] Greece
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    Fate/Ultimate Antagonist
    Anime & Comics · XElenea
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred2d
    Commented

    To be honest, every time mc stutters and acts shy and embarrassed, it makes him cringe. He has a harem after all, he should be more confident and assertive

    Ch 160 Chapter 158 ~ Tooya City
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    Welcome to the Multiverse Chat Group!
    Anime & Comics · EclypseX
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred3d
    Posted

    This fics is meh, judging by the writing style author is super newbie. First of all I will recommend you to study about novel outline. The writing is a mess and so many plot holes. The mc is feels like robot, i can't feel any emotion by the interaction between characters.

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    Highschool dxd : Yasaka is my wife
    Anime & Comics · The_Creator223
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred4d
    Commented

    Let him cook! 🔥🔥

    Ch 200 Chapter 200 Dropouts, Sakayanagi Is Unhappy.
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    COTE: Hikigaya Hachiman In The Classroom Of The Elite
    Anime & Comics · JYouyi
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred5d
    Replied to Tenjou_Sekai

    Is there any romance, harem, or lemon?

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    Path to Omniscience: Tensura
    Anime & Comics · Tenjou_Sekai
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred6d
    Posted

    MC is a doll, that's all. You read jjk? You know itadori yuji? Yes, this MC's fics is like him, protagonist but feels like npc. Don't waste your time to read this... Trust me, even the tier 3 harem fics will have a better story plot

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    Devil's Luck[Arc 5: Worlds Apart]
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred6d
    Commented

    More romantic development pls and less yuri scenes, that would be perfect. Also can I know your updates schedule?

    Ch 72 Chapter 68
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    I Just Want To Have A Quiet Life, So Why Did I Become A Herrscher?
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred7d
    Commented

    Alight, i like the drama... But still, he interrupt rias engagement...

    Ch 51 [51]Game is Set
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    Ultimate Herrsher in DxD
    Anime & Comics · Shonpufi
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred8d
    Commented

    Write more romantic development please.. its only 2 so far and I want moreee!

    Ch 79 The Comfort Zone.
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    Persona: The Phantom Masquerade.
    Video Games · Phantom_Voyage
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred8d
    Commented

    Ey! You forgot about melusine, she is the incarnation of albion right... lets call her later

    Ch 46 Chapter 46 - Vali VS Artoria, Artoria’s Real Debute in DxD World
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    I am secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God
    Anime & Comics · Daoist_KittyKat
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred9d
    Replied to DizzMe

    I personally prefer your atg fics... Will you upload your atg fics or it just focused only to this fic?

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 Bang [NSFW]
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    Anime Apocalyptic World [Edited]
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred9d
    Posted

    Buat karya pemula cerita nya so-so lah.. gw kasih paham poin minus nya aja menurut gw 1. Adek si mc ini ga perlu ato minimal di bikin support character. Screen time nya si adek mc ini ngalahin mc, bahkan gw pikir adek nya mc ini sebenarnya mc sedangkan kakak nya itu npc. Terus reverse harem nya *cuih, kesan nya adek mc punya reverse harem ini kek lonT. Saran gw kl masih mau masukin adek mc mending di bikin ke pov laen ato di jadiin chapter omake terus tambahin screen time mc nya bambang! 2. Serius le ini yg bikin gw ga nyaman bacanya, tata bahasa lu amburadul. Minimal nulis nya pake tata bahasa yg baik dan benar... Kl pake istilah inggris boleh la, tapi lu juga masukin bahasa jepang ini bikin cringe baca nya, aura wibu nya keliatan kentel banget

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    FGO Nasional?
    Anime & Comics · Yuuya3
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred9d
    Commented

    Tftc. But author, i think the updates schedule would be 1 chp/day? Or it is still 1 chp/week? Can you confirm me the right update schedule author?

    Ch 73 Chapter 28 Part 2
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    I'm a Daemon, so what? (Tensura/Multicross)
    Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred10d
    Replied to dragonNEET2567

    Is there any romance or harem so far?

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    Martial Soul Simulator
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  • LunaKindred
    LunaKindred13d
    Replied to Negation

    Don't you think to upload it in another platforms like scribblehub or ff.net?

    Ch 11 Volume 1: Epilouge
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    Get Creative in this Outlandish World
    Anime & Comics · Negation
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