The description is very well written, to miniscule details such as the side of witch someones hair is blowing, to the water droplets on the car window. Updates are slow but It is because the author has school and told me that they would do lots of updates during thanksgiving. The character design is copied off of many anime series but their tone is a little wack. Overall it is a great story and the book is also on wattpad, they may have different usernames but they are the same people.