Sinceramente eu gosto dessa história o desenvolvimento esta correto alguns erros aqui e ali mas isso se da a falta de informação de bnha como ainda e uma obra sendo feita inclusive acertou sobre a estagnação das peculiaridades com o tempo quando vc ve bem a obra de bnha vc percebe que as peculiaridades estão condenando o proprio mundo como a falta de estabilidade com as gerações mais novas que obviamente estão mais próximas de estourar como um balão muitos dos comentários ao arco bnha foram na minha opinião ridículas porquê 1 a pessoa não leu ou 2 a Pessoa não entendeu ou 3 a pessoa tem simplesmente tem ma intenção com o autor o nivel de desenvolvimento do plano de fundo do mundo e magistral eu bato palmas e difícil ver tanto empenho nos dias de hoje a maioria das histórias aqui nem terminam e nos leitores que lemos somos obrigados a ficar com um gosto amargo nojento e uma revolta no fundo da mente ao ler um trabalho incompleto bom na minha opinião seu trabalho e um 10/10

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a really good job so far i'm not disappointed and bored keep up the good work i have high expectations with this story i wish you luck with this story

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how good it is to have new blood the story is going very well i have a lot of hope for this story wish you luck my friend

there are few one punch man universe stories so it's a big surprise to find a story like this really a good job keep the good work man i like it

I really liked this story and a pity that the writer stopped making it really sad I really liked it had a story writing was really good I wish there was more

I like is very good

Metro +1

beware of the mickey mouse you will get bubonic plague and a lot of disease you will need the power of the golden mousetrap to end the tyranny of the mouse and his millions of children while he plans his death

be careful the creative man will conquer the world with his mac Donald hambúrguer and his incledible power to throw blocks in people's homes beware he will put creepers in your homes

thanks for the work man really good work good idea

I liked the development of the characters a well written story with a good good and interesting development the time line is very good to go on

the story is great i am happy to have something good to read since there are not so many stories about scp and the ones that have are boring and saturated with meaningless characters Good Work

so far the premise is getting great my hope for duality is high I want to see how this story unfolds and its great stories will give hope so well for something captivating and a good show

i liked the story precise dialogs story not too out of the original of the scp and a protagonist who cares about something not only about himself

I liked the story and concrete and different from the other stories in which the character is either an asshole or a cold and calculating brick wall it gets boring after a while the representation of the characters is good