Xeno2000
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Why does the protagonist say he is 13? There should be 12. After all when he took the entrance exam it was said that he was 11 years old and in the meantime 11+1 months have passed, which is 1 year. Could someone please explain to me if I'm wrong somewhere. (Google trad)
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I don't know where the white empire is located, however the pearl tower the author is talking about is in Shanghai. And for the blue empire, the Sapphire Skyscraper happens to be the Saphir Tower located in Istanbul. (Google trad) So the blue empire should be Turkey and the white empire apparently also China.
I don't know if it's just me, but I find it a little disturbing that our MC talks to his parents like it's those friends rather than his parents. Let me explain the problems I find seeing our MC talking to these parents as well as: - Our MC is only 1 year old, but can read, (probably write) and speak at an adult level without either parent teaching her, or really surprising them. - That both parents dialogue with our MC as if she were at their level (in the sense of a close friend, rather than their 1 year old daughter). - And that our MC speaks in a strange way, (when we think that the people around him are his family), talking to them in a sustained way and sometimes using expressions that are out of place with his physical age (1 year) and mental (I think around 18). (Google trad)
Hi, as I write this comment the fanfic is at chapter 69, so I don't think anyone will answer me. But why can the MC use electrical devices, such as a cell phone, when we know that magic in Harry Potter burns out said devices and renders them normally unusable?
Great chapter. Otherwise I would vote more for "The irregular at Magic Highschool".