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Hendinklette

Hendinklette

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Canadian writer boi, just trying to write and chill. If you like what I do and have a lot of cash check out my patreon because I’m a shill! https://www.patreon.com/Hendinklette

2020-10-28 JoinedCanada
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Commented

    The story may slow down from here idk

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    Outside Paradise
    Fantasy · Hendinklette
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Posted

    I never was able to get into this genre of story, but i found the plot and characters very engaging. Your writing style is interesting and I've yet to find any pace stumping grammatical errors. A great read!

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    Light Years Away
    Urban · midnight_bloom
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Commented

    Much more is coming soon!!

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    Outside Paradise
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Commented

    leave a comment or review!

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    Outside Paradise
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Commented

    More chapters soon!

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    Outside Paradise
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Replied to Zerofuggs

    How dare I Forget the bacon... i will surely find a place for it in the upcoming chapters

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    Outside Paradise
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Commented

    Keep on reading!

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    Outside Paradise
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Replied to TaintedMetal

    Thanks for your time and thoughts, I was just wondering what you think my characters are missing? Is there anything in specific you think I should inflate them with??? Thank you again for your critique!

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    Outside Paradise
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Replied to Hendinklette

    Also don’t stop improving!

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    Fantasy · Flamerstorymaker
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Posted

    Found this book and have a facsination with the characters and story... Writing and grammer could use some work including the flow of paragraph structure, but i hope you continue working on it and eventually get to a point where you have a Real following!!! Good luck And keep writing

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    Fantasy · Flamerstorymaker
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Commented

    New Chapters coming soon!

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    Outside Paradise
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Posted

    I found your writing engaging and very well described, Although I didn't feel personally attached to your characters I loved the story and creativity put into the story!

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    Ancient Force
    Fantasy · devilDestroyer
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Replied to devilDestroyer

    agreed

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    The Bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Posted

    Really miss this story! Please bring back The characters were addicting and the story was fantastic! I really wait for more! Thank you AUTHOR

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    DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDgrsg
    Fantasy · Zerofuggs
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Replied to TheElisse

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review the Book! What confusion did you have with the prologue? Is there anything I can fix?

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    Outside Paradise
    Fantasy · Hendinklette
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Replied to Zerofuggs

    Umm... Thanks for the... Kind words(?)

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    Outside Paradise
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Replied to Hendinklette

    I forgot to mention, the story is thought out and thoroughly fleshed out. A great plot so far!!

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    The Bet
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Posted

    The story seems quite interesting, but the characters are hard to understand and feel as the writing could use some better editing. Grammar and spelling mistakes are apparent throughout. However, if the chapters were re-edited the character's personalities would definitely shine through! Please keep updating!

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    The Bet
    Urban · Jo_J
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Replied to Jo_J

    I understand the confusion and disorganization that can arise from the way I presented the prologue. I write in sub-chapters rather than a single long chapter, so there is only one prologue which is divided into 7 sub-chapters. Sorry for the confusion... I made a comment under the first Sub-chapter! thank you for letting me know!

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    Outside Paradise
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  • Hendinklette
    Hendinklette3yr
    Posted

    Shameless Plug - Thank you for checking out my story, I hope to continue this and won't be dropping it no matter what! This story has been brewing for a while and I just want to get it out there for people to see, as I think all stories should be! Thank you again and I hope you enjoy it!

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