Schaar

PEN pal, she First needs to find herself

+1

somewhat like the Dead Space RIG with Auto-Injection? is a nice Idea.

nice to have you back

wouldn't you be more reasonable as well, if there is no one to constantly belittle your family? i mean that are nearly all interactions with her in the original. the only other thing is with Ye Han and even there she is only following her brothers orders, while she knows she could be soul shackled at every moment if she seems to not be cooperating 100%

Seeing Mira calming down

Aren't they already outside, 'cause the paragraph before said they are walking the grounds

+1

Not entirely correct, he met Norbert/a in first year

Hermione would probably clash personality wise, but Daphne, Tonks, Fleur, Susan and perhaps Padma Patil would be interesting additions. Or, if he wants to stay near his year, there should be the Gryffindor chaser girls