Losing a leg probably means more time to write.

I'm counting on you, dutch.

taxes couldn't be that big, assuming he was indian and since the average tax rate is about 30% 19,500,000 But since this is an in-game tax we're talking about, it's safe to assume that it's between 8-10% 6,500,000 so our MC has at LEAST 59 Million USD.

Revenge is a fools game we cant afford, Rudra...

One more flaw, the weaposn that are dropped are TOO high level specially this early in the game. It should've had limitation, like "You can only equip this item after reaching level 50" and "You need to this minimum stat points to properly equip this item Strength: 75, Vitality ;50" it gives tension and importance to the stat points instead of being just there as a feature or design.

I'm an amature writer just like you and even made the same mistake as you but; Yes, slow down a bit. Take more time to flesh out the rules of your world, I also recommend drawwing a map (It doesn't need to be great) so you can better understand the locations. Like, if Blackwater is in the eastern continent, you may forget this detail a hundred chapters from now so its better to have a pre-drawn map.

Well... Duh!

philippines capital has like 24 million people lol

"Bandits!" Rudra cried out in warning! Hmm, cried out does sound better, I'm gonna use that in my future novels from now on.

Usually a baron is given land to govern, a viscount is not much different but has a higher standing than a baron.

Rupees are so invaluable that it might as well be replaced with dollars. Actually some countries already implemented this. The most recent one I can remember is SRI lanka. since their currency was devalued so much that their citizens and eventually the government began dealing in foreign currency. Such as the USD and the POUND STERLING.

My one complain about fatty is that he and his friendship with MC is too shallow. Life is more than just money. Maybe if he not only loaned money to MC but also let him lodge in his apartment. As he was livinga destructive live-style fatty tried to straighten him up and get him a job to eventually support himself. But through constant argument and bickering he finally put him on a trial by kicking him out. To make him realized that he's on his last threads and that he shouldn't keep smashing right through the same brick-wall despite knowing that it is destructive to those around him and those who care for him.

I think a good mechanic to counter these type of issues is "Mask" Any type of mask or mouth mask will do. Like putting a cloth on your face or a mask to hide your identity, but some impedes your vision or breath (stamina) and you'll have to take it off when entering a village/City/town/Capital.

oh we're using "Ancient beauty" instead of "jade beauty"?

Mc is built different and exceptional. Remember. he has the experience of an elite. He was the only one capable of mastering the controls right of the bat and had the experience of dealing with low level monsters while others were only getting used to it.

it looks fine though...

Gago ka pala eh, tangina mo 1v1 tayo? tirahin kita sa puwet eh.

Rip my past grammar, Hard to think it could change so much in just a measly 6 months...

They either saved up or bought if from home credit. Say you owe 5000 USD You 215 USD every month for 24 months (2 years) which would be more affordable for normal people. Grand total would be 5160 USD but its probably more.

Spoiler alert, she was the one who snitched on Rudra