MORE!

WHERE ARE THE OTHER CHAPTERS!

YAAAY! Poor Alicia, but....THE HELLISH TRAINING IS BACK!

Everything is ok, but I didn't like the relationships. An there's the side story, I don't like it either. as I said at the begining, th rest is pretty much ok.

When the author said “Sweet hell” I say... DREAM WORLD!

Thank you! But I’d like questions. The bext chapter will actually answers for those questions.

Thanks! I'd be really happy if people like you commented.But...Ok! Thak you. (not really much to say, heh)

My friends always plays UNO with me, and...We actually become BETTER friends with each other...But we also have special rules for mean or bad people, that makes them hate us! (on purpose) I bet the people who play with us are BONEly, right?

Nice! I also thought that! Really, it isn't frisk whithout determination right? left? heh.

I agree with one of the comments. There is both temmie and The Annoying dog, soooo...Shouldn't Akane have a cute white dog? a striped shirt wearing cat? I dunno.

‘Sup readers! Author here. I didn’t another character. Again! I will describe kata. The new caracter! She has red eyes, brown hair, and some ninja green and yellow clothes (both dark). She uses some kind of japanese shoes. And I’m sorry again for not having the right mood! Thank you!

Hey there! Author here! I'm writing a review to tell you that I forgot to do somethings in the story. 1- The protagonist shoes are pink slippers 2-G's human form. Hair: light-blue pigtails; Skin and face: big golden eyes, fair skin. Clothes: light blue /black striped knee length dress, purple scarf. 3-Alluca is the nickname of allucaru, the 3rd character. And I'm So Sorry for havin no SANSational puns. (those who played undertale will get it).

thank you very much!

I liked it very much! the first chapter was amazing. I love Isekai stories, and this is my first web novel! I'm glad it was this one .