This story is truly great, Your writing skills are better than most that I normally see; The story is explained in such a way that you could imagine what every frame of this story may look like the motions and the charater's emotions to their reactions. This story has changed the way I look at things as far as I can see, Although I am still quite young your really- just great with your wording. The book was great and I hope you will reach great hights with other book's. (That is if you make other book's)