this guy stole copy scrool of seals in 3 horuss and no one finds out. you said that naruto let him rom the village undetected. are you sure you are writing about ninja not some morden socity without chakra.

12 yeAR NARUTO was able to jump in buildings without any training in chakra control but mc need rope and lader to climb and you say he is very strong lol.

arleardy using grammerly

good novel. starting chapter are little big and the story concept was good. keep up the novel and dont drop it in half way. so i want mooooooore plzzzzzzz

author here with smaless five star reviews heee. i had improve the gramer and also had rewritten the first chapter. try to see if it is upto the mark