Wow. I loved reading what you have available so far. I look forward to following Alex and Zoey's story. You just gained another fan! You did a wonderful job of transitioning the pronouns as well as the personality of Alex throughout the story. I appreciate your writing capabilities because they are similar to my own. You moved the story in a seamless matter and you are a mature writer, you get deep and I like that. Thank you for putting yourself out there. Writing is personal and many forget that you embed parts of yourself into the worlds and storylines you create. There is always a truth that speaks out when you write and I connected with what you have to offer your audience. Keep up the good work! It is worth so much more.