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You had a good background to play with but you just followed the show. The MC is a moron and just not very interesting, being OP to stupid heights from the beginning is not engaging to read. His obsession with Lagertha who is god forbid acting like a young Chinese Mistress is ugh. How others treat him including his family is very confusing, to say the least. Last but not least the author seems to be petty to criticism and has traded insults in both comments and reviews so pointing out any flaws in the story seems to trigger him.

DO NOT READ THIS IT WAS STOLEN FROM FF.NET FROM SEVERUSPHOENIX THE NOVEL IS CALLED 3 SLYTHERIN MARAUDERS A COMPLETED NOVEL THE THIEF IS TRYING TO SCAM PEOPLE OF THEIR MONEY TO READ ON HIS PATREON REPORT IT ON WEBNOVEL AND FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO PAID REPORT ON PATERON TO GET REFUNDED AND SO THEY CAN REPORT THIS SCAM TO THE AUTHORIES OF THE THIEF HOME COUNTRY.

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I don't like this what has been written for Thorfinn's character his children are important to him so not claiming them seems to go against his character that was written so far.

thx for the chapters. I find that I just can't like Scott he's always been unlikeable to me.

no, he doesn't are you kidding me the spiders that bit Peter and Gwen were so far above the norm Peter has the same potential as Miles to become one of the strongest spiders in the multiverse and Gwen is not too far behind either. Also, you can't compare the spiders and SSS, the spiders always gave superhuman strength while the SSS gave enhanced strength even with the changes made Harry still won't hit the potential power that Peter or the girls have spider muscles are stupid powerful Peter in the comics lifted the daily bungle once that's a 5 storie building weighing 2000 TONS ya harry won't ever be able to compete.

I hope you burn

Author just do what was done in the 94 Spiderman cartoon when she became a Super Soldier she was able to change her hair color from blonde to silver so just make it one of the new powers she has gotten from the spider bite.

It's a sad running joke that Susan Storm never had a choice of life or love. Even if she doesn't meet Reed, another Reed from another universe, timeline, or dimension will come to that universe and groom her to be with Reed. There was literally a comic run of the F4 that showed an alternate Reed and Susan inviting alternate versions of them from across the multiverse and the Reeds all showing off how they got susan it was so disgusting 1 of them even mentioned they brainwashed Susan to love him.

This has been planned from the beginning of the novel where the readers wanted both MJ and Felicia to be a variant of their Spiderverse selves.

the only reason he is with her is because in most universes he groomed her since she was a child after her parents died no doubt still one of the most messed up Marvel couples.

Man, what is up with people stealing this novel from FF at least the other 2 who stole it and posted it here never tried to make money off of it while this guy cuts down a single chapter into 4 parts he has the gull to set up a Patreon trying to charge people to read advanced chapters of a story that is still more then 75 chapters ahead on FF btw if anyone wants to read the real novel it called The Spider by I'mjusttryingtofindmyway.

Kitty Pride has been slept on a lot it sad I mean in the comics thanks to her unique mutation it was extremely compatible with magic so at one point she became a sorcerer supreme. If I remember correctly, the Spider-Girl version was actually crazy strong. One version of her became president while another version of her was weapon X. Then the version where her powers allowed her to strengthen herself as The Shroud. She even became a Cosmic Being and was at one point the strongest being in Marvel even more powerful the TOAA.

we only count females and not males or family to Peter because the last spider is probably the last harem member.

That Last Spider has many candidates to choose from you have Cindy Moon, Jessica Drew, Anya Corazon, Mattie Franklin, Julia Carpenter, Kitty Pride, María Vásquez, and lastly Betty Brant all of who got bitten by a spider, and eventually donned a spider identity as a hero.

well besides Cindy Moon there are also Jessica Drew, Anya Corazon, Mattie Franklin, Julia Carpenter, Kitty Pride, María Vásquez, and lastly Betty Brant all of who got bitten by a spider and eventually donned a spider identity as a hero.