Zeroren

yeah, I'm disappointed with this the Author bitched out of what he said he was going to do. Honestly with all that went down, Luke is a shitty character so what he got weds what to stop him from changing his mind and falling in love with some other girl and then pulling the same shit he did with Enid, after all bloodline is important and if you write another powerful psychic that dual and show interest in Luke what would happen then. There is always going to be that looming over their relationship and judging how further chapters go it pretty much shows the author wrote this shit out of his ass because he couldn't figure out how to do a trouple, which he shouldn't have fucking promised in the 1st place. Also, does he really love weds, or is it more of a relationship for convenience's sake she a dual psychic he can pass off to get a strong bloodline with and he can be a shitty edgelord with her as much as he wants to. At least with Enid she brought out something new to him and helped him make friends with Xavier and Ajax This just became like every other weds fanfic out there disappointing and filled with false promises. This ending may be realistic but lets call it what it is a copout.

Well this got stupid I never liked Arthurian legend and to see what the future of thorfins kids and grandson will be kinda sucks. While you choose to incorporate that but alas what's done is done. We will just have to read through the muck that's to come hopefully for a better part of the story. Btw do you have some fetish for taking away the MC kids and making him suffer yes I understand he can't beat Dahlia that was honestly a lost cause from the beginning but he could have prayed to the gods to help for protection for his children.

The MC is the type of shithead to get people killed. His type of always being argumentative and hostile is cancerous in survival situations if you don't have anything helpful to say or you know an actual goddamn plan stfu.

tftc! We need a powerful and badass villain(like avengers level villain) who will push Peter and the team far beyond their limits.

The story would be actually decent if the MC actually did stuff instead of farming orbs. BTW MC is supposed to be an Anbu but you have his comrades calling him by name WTF this story gets even more stupid once the travesty called romance comes in solid skip or read if you want to lose some brain cells.

Jeez, another stolen novel can't tell now how many are flooding this website. The original novel is called Losing Control By JackPotr it is a completed novel on Fanfiction.

ya, this just became stupid a nightmare mode should feel like it but this doesn't. Plus the whole live a fantasy and ignores reality just to get a bunch of chicks and act like the world a game is stupid.

You must really be seriously lacking intelligence to steal a novel from someone as popular in the HP fanfic community as to steal from SInyk. For shame anyway, this novel is called Harry Potter and the Daft Morons by Sinky a very popular writer on fanfiction.

Jeez, why is it that almost every Harry Potter novel I see is stolen from fanfiction? This is called Harry Potter and the Gift of Memories by The Engulfing Silence a COMPLETED NOVEL on fanfiction. Please don't support stolen stories and read them on the website posted by the actual author.

Another novel stolen from Robst on fanfiction. It is a completed novel named A Kiss Can Save the World. Support the original author and read the completed work there.