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In your opinion, should Huo Yuhao stay with Tianmeng? I was thinking about giving Tianmeng to Yu Haochen, but that would kind of kill Yuhao's prospects. If I leave it to Yuhao, his development will be similar to the original book, if I leave it to Yu Haochen, Yuhao's development will be extremely different from what it would be originally. And even if Yu Haochen receives Tianmeng and later the Ice Empress, his development would also be very different from Yuhao in the original book.
I already have plans to rewrite my ff, but my notebook broke. I'm currently working on a job to suave money to buy a PC Gamer to write my ff and play games. Sadly it may took a little bit longer, but i already saved some to see If i can buy one in this Black Friday that is coming.
Untill now i didn't see any changes in the plot besides his Sharingan. Also, if he has the ninja techniques and chakra manipulation skills, he dont need the tang sect techniques. I dont see a valid reason for him to become a tang sect member and become a puppet for Tang San again, the original plot was already hateful, so please tell me that you wont make him a dog for Tang San and a simp for wang dong'er
Tbh, Isagi cant learn metavision on the first selection. He still dont know how to use his eyes that well. In the manga he got hints from Itoshi Rin and began to evolve his eyes in the matchs after losing to Rin. He only managed to got metavision in the NEL because he acummulate experiência before. I'm not saying that your novel is bad, its just that isagi cant gain metavision with his corrente specs and lack of experience with his eyes
That was pretty good. There's one last chapter before the end of this volume right? Also, if i didnt read wrong, it was said in the chapter that silver lost his eyes/vision right? Will he recovery his eyes/vision after the fight is over or will he take a while to heal?
Me? Yes, but i'm thinking of rewritig the whole thing... Like, because i gave too much information about the ancestor of the mc It became a problem. Because of that, i lost the chance to create some plot in the future about the universe that i would like the MC to uncover himself. So, i will most likely write something very different than i alredy wrote.