This website is full of hot garbage upvoting their cliche novels with barely basic English comprehension. Ohh and add more smut and R-18 scenes in order to get those blue balled losers jacking off
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Man the hoops and mental gymnastics you go to ship those two is insane. Holy shit you turned him into a bitch doormat that just takes the disrespect up the ass. Even when she maliciously blackmails him. An embarrassing doormat.
Holy fucking doormat dude. Your mc is a fucking doormat. It’s honestly embarrassing.
Mc is a doormat. Worse he continues to help while they shit on him and blatantly disregard and disrespect him despite all he does to help. Have him grow a pair you disgusting masochist.
So explain why we the readers have to stomach a fucking doormat mc that helps the ones shiting on him constantly? Nobody likes a doormat dude. Grow some fucking balls you masochistic loser.
Thanks for this saved me from wasting my time.
Yes I’m sure it does improve considering I read this on fanfic.net under a different name… I wonder why that is? Ohhh wait because it’s stolen. Man this website attracts some scum. And the whole patreon thing…. Man people like you need to stop.
This trash is just a therapy story about talking about your feelings. Holy crap man talk about a pity dump. He author can’t go one chapter without inner monologue of angst. It’s disgusting. Dude we get it. Boo hoo cry me a river.
Doormat behaviour is really grating on me dude.
Not without part 2 sorry not sorry. I shall withhold my praise till part 2 is uploaded. Again I’m sorry not sorry but you dared to blue ball me on a cliffhanger.
A push over fucking door mat from start to finish. I truly hope you kill your self and never try to write again you masochistic waste of oxygen