YouDareJunior
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YouDareJunior1yrCommentedthis reads like it was written by a 14 year old edgy teen
When Rob gets angry, he becomes a real demon who won't rest until his madness is cured, and it seems that his nature has even followed him into his new life.detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH- YouDareJunior1yrCommented"Talk or die." She only uttered three words.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommented1 Blazing Ring, 1 Earth Bracelet, 1 pair of Velocity Boots. These four were objects that Bai Zemin already had, so they would be given to someone else.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommentedBai Zemin's voice was as cold as ice. Especially at the end; his voice seemed to be that of a demon from hell. As everyone looked at little Luo Ning who seemed oblivious to everything as she sat on his lap, they all noticed that the leader seemed to be quite kind to children.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommentedHe had noticed a strange closeness between Bai Zemin and Shangguan Bing Xue after they returned from the forest victorious. It was not a romantic closeness by any means, but Chen He noticed a kind of harmony and calmness between the two. Something like this was hard to expect since considering the similar personalities that Shangguan Bing Xue and Bai Zemin had, the most normal thing would be to expect a big disagreement between the two.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommentedShe knew his fighting methods well and knew that most of the time, the corpses of his enemies ended up in three conditions:
- YouDareJunior1yrCommentedChen He's eyes flashed with competitive light and he clenched his fists tightly. He had currently reached level 25 and was slowly fulfilling his conditions of evolving to First Order, so he hoped that at the very least, that huge gap between him and the man he considered his greatest rival since birth would at least shorten a little.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommentedShangguan Bing Xue even raised an eyebrow in surprise. She looked at Bai Zemin, waiting to see what his reaction to the teasing words would be.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommentedShe was also wearing a female police uniform. Although her face was not as charming as Wu Yijun's baby face, nor as beautiful as Shangguan Bing Xue's fairy face, her body was tantalizingly seductive. Every curve seemed to have been carved by the hands of a procelain expert and the aura surrounding her had stolen everyone's attention from the first moment she showed herself.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommented"Hehe...:" She giggled like a little girl.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommentedFortunately or not, the only man currently present was Bai Zemin. However, he only glanced at them for a second before turning his eyes back to the main road.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommentedOutside the military tent, Bai Zemin surveyed as Wu Yijun straightened her body to shake off the traces of lingering rigidity. Her seductive body was extremely charming to look at and her big eyes that seemed to sparkle with childlike curiosity only added another layer of charm on her.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommented[You have obtained the Soul Power of Wolf Spider level 8]
- YouDareJunior1yrCommented"Don't worry, ice princess. I'm perfectly fine."
- YouDareJunior1yrCommented"Hehehe..." Wu Yijun smiled sweetly and her eyes curved into a crescent moon shape. She looked at him and asked somewhat curiously, "Bai Zemin, do you have a girlfriend?"
- YouDareJunior1yrCommentedWu Yijun nodded slightly and stood up. Her graceful figure was shown at its best with the tight clothes she was wearing and her expression together with her baby face was unbelievably charming.
- YouDareJunior1yrCommented"You think so?" Wu Yijun stared at him and said with an honest expression, "I think you're quite handsome if we're talking physically... Especially lately."
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Pro: Great read for people who want to get immersed in a world and story that's written well. Progression can feel slow at times. However, it serves a purpose. Con: Character progression is pretty bad. Every character in the story feels dead and fake. MC and other characters in the academy/outside/home randomly going on diatribes of 3 paragraphs is cringe. It literally makes no sense for them to start a random speech out of nowhere. But, the author does this so often that it breaks immersion everytime.