Demon_Gouhl

Abandoned due to the stupidity of the main character or the greed of the Chinese author who wants to stretch out the plot without destroying the future enemy while he is weak

Thank you

I can't explain it but what you write in the last chapters becomes the same and looks more like an everyday genre ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Is this a translation? It's just that your profile says that you are translating a fanfic. If this is a translation, can you give the name of the original?

I admire you, this fanfic could have been blocked like many others, but you still waited and the risk was justified.

I just forgot in which chapters plot holes are present but only in the initial chapters

There are plot holes in the initial chapters but there is no need to rewrite them, new readers will get confused

There are no errors, it seems, except for the plot holes.

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