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Na_Me_Pen9mthReplied to AhliosPupil is the part where light enters the eye. It is black because it is a hole. Golden pupils will make it hard for light to enter the eye
Her appearance was as close to an ordinary human as possible with the exception of her pointy elf-like ears and pupils which were golden in colour.- Na_Me_Pen1yrCommented
Nala is Alan backwards. That will be important, calling it now!
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Drilled ?Does it rotate? Neat trick!
"Haha, this is just the start," Arkhen laughed before he drilled his entire dick into Grace's pussy. - Na_Me_Pen1yrCommented
With nothing left but ashes this pretty much already was a mystery case
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The same boyfriend as before? I thought he had a broken leg?
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So far we only hear him complaining and nothing to support his version of the story. For all we know, he could just be whining for no good reason. I would like a twist, where he is an idiot complaining but then improves himself (or fully turns villain), but I'm afraid it might just be lazy writing and his complaining is supposed to already bring us to his side..
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Well, certainly not with that attitude ....
After many years of chasing her dreams, she decided to stop being a perfectionist, to stop trying to be the very best in everything she does. Jo wanted to put her big dreams aside for a little while. She had realised that she needed to live life to the fullest and forget about perfection. After all, nobody is perfect. - Na_Me_Pen2yrCommented
Golden pupils? Not golden irises ? Biologically, it might be difficult for her to see ....
Her appearance was as close to an ordinary human as possible with the exception of her pointy elf-like ears and pupils which were golden in colour. - Na_Me_Pen2yrCommented
I would say lucky guy. A small humiliation saves his life!
"Get out of the way." - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommented
Didn't he just explain that he is in charge?
"Who's in charge here?" - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommented
If someone threatens your life, they forfeit theirs. That said, a gun is no serious threat to these guys
That someone in the hypothetical situation would either die or, at a bare minimum, lose the arm holding the gun if luck was on their side. - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommented
Rather fortunate, is it not? He likes a challenge and is used to it
That was how strong, nimble, and dangerous these d*mn things were. Unfortunately, this was not his first time running into creatures this strong. - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommented
Assuming the treatment is warranted
It was such a wretched sight that anyone watching would immediately start wondering, if that was punishment then just how big was the crime committed to warrant such treatment? - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommented
If he managed to solve the situation he would be a hero, though .Whowould be harsh on a hero?
The punishment could come afterwards. - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommented
No longer protecting his sister?
Of course, it was none other than 'Beru'. - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommented
Isn't it rather bad form to decide for another country who their representative should be?
- "And we'd like to have Seong Jin-Woo Hunter-nim as Korea's representative." - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommented
In his next life he could be a bad girl instead!
He wasn't a good man. He was just a weak boy. The same useless boy that left his home a month ago with nothing but dreams for the future, with no clue how to achieve them, and only the will to try... - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommentedCh 98 One last shot at destiny
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Psychic paper?
There, on his lap, was a piece of blank white paper in a clear plastic folder… - Na_Me_Pen3yrCommented
Though I wouldn't put it past him to write something like that on his best of days ....
When Ben wrote it, you could say he wasn't thinking straight...