This so far is a really good story, the person who wrote this is really off to a good start, continuing working hard and everything will work out, Good job!

The plot Of the book is good but the reading is hard to understand since it seem some time the main character is a he then is turned in a she so im confused on some of the words that is being used in the story since some things dont make sense and is hard to read. i think the story should be proof read before being posted, but good plot of a story.