Incredible story , Incredible Writing Quality , Incredible main character and , most of all , Incredible Logic Development ! Detail : That's Young Justice , a cartoon, which started out a little fun and got boring and repetitive over time , even though it's DC , it should be posted in the Fanfics catalog on TV .

This story really disappointed me! Batman is TOTALLY irrational and the Justice League justifies this behavior for anything (He literally tried to KILL the MC in Chapter 7 , and failed by very little and still says that was the right thing just because he didn't know who the MC was, with her friends justifying it), the Justice League revealed her secret identity to her mother and justified it with the classic "You gave us no choice" with the sad look. F%CK . For Batman to want to arrest the MC just because he COULD mean a risk is too much of a stretch even for a deliberately repulsive story about Young Justice or any other DC universe. It's absurd and focused mostly on the worst aspects of the characters in the comics that just showed up there because of bad writing.

O protagonista é legal , a história é ótima e mandou um grande "FODA-SE" para a moralidade distorcida autojustificada dos super-heróis da DC Comics . Parabéns

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I, on the other hand, find it extraordinarily amazing that he didn't have this monologue before, which means he never doubted his plans!

Things were just happening between Him, Kara and Raven. It wasn't the fabricated eroticism shown in Fiction (Surprisingly) . He's made it very clear that he's not after a harem. Making a harem for him now would be spitting on most of the story .

FINALLY FUCKING! Finally a fanfic in which the protagonist is not resigned to being a punching bag just because he saw comics and live-action adaptations of these fucking freaks. Seriously, ALL superheroes at some point have extremely immoral and misanthropic behavior, but almost every fanfic I've read so far has the MC trying to make excuses for it, even when he himself is the target of this antics. Congratulations !

Ótima história , é envolvente e mostra uma reação mais realista aos tipos de absurdos completamente ridículos e estúpidos que universos ficcionais como os da Marvel continua à mostrar . Foi exatamente para esse tipo de realidade ambientadas em versos de "Herói vs. Vilão" que eu comecei a ler fanfics em primeiro lugar .

Excelente novel , gostei da construção de mundo e do modo como ele muda outros universos além do Universo Marvel . Só dei um 4,8 por causa da demora para novos capítulos .

Sorry , I forgot to put the stones in yesterday and didn't wake up until noon . Would have given 500 for sure. Anyway, amazing story , I hope it makes a continuation or a spin-off of the other characters that the MC inspired and transmigrated .

The worst thing is that this is not uncommon to happen in the comics. A superpowered person, usually an acclaimed Superhero by the public and completely unaccustomed to being called out for his abusive actions, tries to pick a fight with someone clearly more powerful than they are. (Seriously, this is canon. It's happened to literally every member of the Justice League when they've tried to impose their own patterns in people's minds and the story ridiculously tries to treat this as a "Heroic" thing to do). The writers really messed things up too much in the comics!

This story is good , but it 's still at the beginning . If it improves , I delete this review and make another one . I want to ask the Author a question: Why did he make us "resistant" to bullets? When Two-Face shot him, he received the bullet in much the same way as a normal badass in the DC Universe. I simply hate the illogicality of these stories: A character, totally superhuman and capable of withstanding attacks that would liquefy an ordinary Human with only, at most, a few bruises on his body but at the same time being totally vulnerable to shots from ordinary pistols. . It just never made sense! Other than that , good start to the story .

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One of the things I've always hated about Wolverine is the fact that he tries to present himself as an angry but polite man, but gets angry when people call him rude. Seriously, he always goes straight for murder and gets angry when others call him an out-of-control rabid animal. Whenever he is in a "friendly" fight with some other character, even other superheroes who are FRIENDS OF HIM, he always puts his claws out and tries to MURDER them. The end of this chapter showed it perfectly!

Man, I hate it when the "Heroes" ( Protagonists ) of some story kill innocent animals but decide , for some completely false reason , to spare their enemies . At least the MC of this story stifled this detail and regrets doing so. Excellent detail and comment at the end !

I remember this . Even as a very obese and out of shape man, Robert was incredibly strong. His warhammer was easily lifted, but other very strong knights, such as Eddard, could barely handle it. The obvious result is him being a low-level superhuman.

Does anyone else find Team's arrogance completely ridiculous , forced , bordering on suicide ? I'm not just talking about this fanfic , it's very accurate about the childish behavior of the characters , I'm talking about the canon . Are they so ridiculous when they try to prove they're as good as adults when it's extremely obvious they're not ? I hope they are severely reprimanded for this in the next chapter and that the author at least makes them admit how ridiculously arrogant they were and how they deserved the no-holds-barred beating they received !

Is there any specific reason he's been so open with his secrets in the last few chapters ? He's gone from justifiably distrusting Natasha and Nick and is now blatantly demonstrating all his strengths . Is this just a plot device or does it have an actual motivation within the story ? If you need the element of surprise to preserve the story , you don't have to answer now .

At first I didn't really like the story because of infantilizing the characters, but I checked the source material (Both the DC comics and the Young Justice cartoon) and I was really shocked by the characters being even MORE childish and hypocritical than what is shown in this Fic . I really enjoyed all of the Lampshades about superheroes' hypocrisy and misguided sense of importance, that despite them being very important in this verse, they seem to think that everything they do is totally justified by the fact that it's THEM that's doing it, no no matter how many laws they choose to ignore and on top of that trying to make it look like they "Follow the Book" as if they were literally police in costume! All in all, I think it's a great story for anyone looking to take a break from DC's self-righteous and delusional bullshit, but not good for anyone who just wants a fun story to relax, especially since you're almost certain to be VERY mad at many. characters trying to screw with the MC just because they can't control him!

Very cool story, I like the way they are deconstructing the ridiculous and violent way that Captain America acted during Civil War N°1 ( 140 , 140 , 140 , 140 , 140 , 140 , 140 , 140 , 140 , 140 )