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Although I may make some changes to her, but not too many, I don't want to change her completely.

I honestly think I'm going to put her.

I'll probably fix the plot hole with a chapter update one day 👍.

i mean "the traductor 💀"

his super human strenght (the auto corrector 💀)

We could say that with its claws it grabs onto the bottom of the sea floor and quickly drags itself along while constantly regenerating its lungs, and the bottom is not very deep. I could use my superhuman strength to crawl quickly, I forgot about that weakness 💀.

I think that the Lord of Mysteries verse is MUCH superior to Dragon Ball in terms of power, I mean, there are literally gods and I saw scans a while ago, I think it is already superior to the entire Dragon Ball Super cosmology by a huge and absurd difference, I think... I think that if what I say is true, Super Shenron would not even jokingly grant such a wish, but hey, fiction is fiction.

I also have those chapters saved, although maybe I left it there, saved, the story will still be similar to before the rewrite but I will do it better than before.

Also the beginning was quite MEH in my opinion, I want to give it a different essence and not as same as other system stories.

I consider that the story was poorly done, the beginning was bland and somewhat mediocre, I still have them saved for the other chapters.