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Cellphonea month ago
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incorrect use of the word "infamous"
The travelers on the ship had told Damian that Eldoris was famous for their wood type mages and their infamous building ability but Damian thought they were just talking about doing some simple spells or two of nature magic. Nothing to the scale of having an entire town constructed as a half forest and half orderly paved roads and stone structures. It wasn't fully same types of buildings in the city though, Some were grander than others, some more withered, some looked new, some had colors on it and some were completely made out of stones as if those patches were allergic to greenery which was spread everywhere.
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
Cellphonea month ago
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How old is Damian at this point? Is he still 9 or so?
Ch 64 War
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
Cellphonea month ago
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Woah 'Infiltration' finally ended!
Eldoris
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
Cellphonea month ago
Commented
I feel like the chapter name should've changed by this point,maybe calling it "escape" or something
Infiltration 11
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
Cellphonea month ago
Commented
his >> him
The mountain stands alone stance broke with one heavy kick from above but Damian managed to block the sword that followed the kick. Responding with overhead guard to his two handed downwards slash. Damian took whole weight of the prince and threw his on the side. The prince landed on his feet with no effort at all.
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
Cellphonea month ago
Replied to Kevin_Strata
Seems like something that ought to have been communicated at some point earlier in the story 🤷
"Take this and stand near the window while pointing the drawing part outside the open window. Remember to open the window before pointing...."
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
Cellphonea month ago
Commented
*"Stay as quiet as possible."
"Keep as much quite as possible.. You go last and stay a little further than us, you have to save the kid..."
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
Cellphonea month ago
Commented
This paragraph is a mess
After that using a stick and questionable drawings on the ground the two 'knights' explained Damian the so called plan. It was simple enough. Infiltration in the knight's headquarters by climbing the walls, then going to the main building where the cells were by sneaking and then they would try to sneakily get the kid out but it was most likely not going to be that easy, in that case the four of them will fight the knights on guard duty to attract as much attention as possible so Damian could get the kid out of his cell and sneak him out of the headquarters while knights will make their own escape and everyone will meet at the abandoned building where they were standing right now afterwards, supposedly there was a way that led out of the city under it's basement.
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
Cellphonea month ago
Replied to 90Bry
It would be nice if the author went back to fix these as they are pointed out, or to have an editor of sorts do it
It was called a sword art though, that Damian had learned at least that. In all the books he had seen or read there was never a mention of any sword arts just some sword techniques that focused on how to fight as a swordsman rather than casting spells with a sword. Maybe the Spellsword academy might know what it really was but that won't help Damian.
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError
Cellphonea month ago
Commented
"seconds" should be "moments" (unless that was a very slow attack...
Two same powerful slashes were coming at him and this time he neither had water shield or blades. Cursing under his breath Damian threw caution to the wind and started drawing with both his hands throwing the sword, with twice the speed the runic magic circle finished just seconds before the slashes came on him. Damian activated the [Invisible box] spell and sighed in relief when both blue slashes crashed against it and stopped in their path. They pushed till the energy in them lasted making a little crack on the invisible wall that Damian only heard because of his fist hand experience on this wall breaking otherwise it was unnoticeable.
The Runic Alchemist
Fantasy · GlaringError