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Good grammar, good character design. All details are given when tellig teh story, it feels like emperor's domination, but definitely not as cliche, with the same harem story being repeated again and again
Not bad, i guess? I mean, the story's fine. the world is well built. since its in earth and the characters are detailed enough. The premise is interesting and a little different. But I feel like only after like 50 chapters could this be a turning point, like onlya fter 50 chapters are published, i could know how good this book could get if you get what i mean
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