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Francis_Joseph28

Francis_Joseph28

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2020-10-21 JoinedGlobal
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph282yr
    Commented

    yes it means to bang but since when has Mo Fan not wanted to spread his seeds

    She was a frequent visitor to Japan. Otherwise, why would she be so fluent in Japanese? Her seductive look when she was speaking Japanese always gave Mo Fan the urge to ask for seeds.
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    Versatile Mage
    Fantasy ¡ Chaos (Fish's Sky)
    detail
  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph282yr
    Commented

    wasn't the purple flame the fusion of water and fire? wouldn't this mean he fused three elements?

    Ch 369 Terrifying Power. Fused Arcane Mysteries!
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    Breeding Dragons From Today
    Fantasy ¡ Fish For Every Year
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph282yr
    Commented

    just wanted to ensure you are OK. missing the chapters

    Ch 482 Steering the Wheel (2)
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    The Ultimate Support Character
    Fantasy ¡ Dyrem
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph282yr
    Commented

    story has kept my interest for this long and now there is more!? Waiting for the next chapter is such sweet torture. I look forward to where things go from here

    Ch 455 Memories (1)
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    The Ultimate Support Character
    Fantasy ¡ Dyrem
    detail
  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph282yr
    Replied to strawaa

    I appreciate the offer but writing is a hobby and doubt I can make any type of production requirements.

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    Dragon's Blood
    Fantasy ¡ Francis_Joseph28
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph282yr
    Commented

    to be honest it feels more like a romance story now. we've had about 3-4 chapters of action and about 8-9 of him checking on his girls, flirting with new girls, and adding them to his roster. Nothing seemingly important happens other than him getting a new skill

    Ch 421 Predestined
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    The Ultimate Support Character
    Fantasy ¡ Dyrem
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph282yr
    Commented

    though the story is good I fear the harem is getting to big to properly develope the characters.

    Ch 390 Is it fine...?
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    The Ultimate Support Character
    Fantasy ¡ Dyrem
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph283yr
    Commented

    I have to agree with the other comments. There is to much filler and back story. Im starting to loose track of what the MC is doing.

    Ch 327 Alchemy Formula
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    End of the Magic Era
    Fantasy ¡ Zhuang Bifan
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph283yr
    Commented

    I cannot help but see similarities between this and the wheel of time series. It is different enough to be refreshing but close enough to give a sense of familiarity

    Ch 221 Will the rope hold?
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    My Dragon System
    Fantasy ¡ JKSManga
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph283yr
    Commented

    exp

    Ch 2072 The Possibilities of the Blood Feather Knife
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi ¡ Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
    detail
  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph283yr
    Commented

    hahaha every parents problem

    Ch 1425 Genetic
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi ¡ Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph283yr
    Commented

    guess weed is legal in the 4th sanctuary

    Ch 1340 Sheep
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi ¡ Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
    detail
  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph283yr
    Commented

    fast pass

    Ch 1336 The Third Contract Between Humans and Spirits
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi ¡ Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
    detail
  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph283yr
    Commented

    👍

    Ch 1246 Battle Gene Beast Soul
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi ¡ Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph283yr
    Commented

    awesone

    Ch 1245 Three-Life Fruit
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi ¡ Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Francis_Joseph28
    Francis_Joseph283yr
    Commented

    great story. I have been enthralled for weeks. if I may offer some constructive criticism there seems to be times when you repeat the same thing for a couple of paragraphs. over all this is just a minor inconvenience to such a great story.

    Ch 870 Black Coffin
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi ¡ Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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