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good gacha - a hardrive with porn virus on it (just in case gladios ever gets to evil) bad gacha - a gun that always misses its mark even if its held right at it -lightning in a bottle (its just a lightning in a bottle) -a boomerang that fly across the entire world before coming back it may take days, months even years just remember to watch to keep your head safe - a rock (how large you guess) - a wig that when worn makes everyone thing you are important but makes you look pompous (like one of those old judge wigs)
i said he was human not likeable him trying to steal his kill is such a normal thing have you ever played a mmorpg or a battle royal where some rando steals you kill and take the rewards
i am not taking about him trying to steal bells kill but the other stuff
dont listen to this idiots the mc you created is so human all be it a bit mischievous
yow what happen to the the the wizard fairy book
i have to say this before my true review ABSOLUTE CINEMA . Now then i have to say i love the characters that are in this fanfic heck this might truly be a novel at this point. They actually have a life sad to say since because of that it takes time to reach the juicy parts i want but none the less thats not seen often now a days so i can appreciate it. The mc is not this all powerful wizard at the start like regular transmigrator but gradually gets power as he fulfills wishes for other . On that topic how he get stronger is a very innovative way, for him to get a spell item or etc he has to fulfill the wishes of others by doing so he collects "destiny energy" (might have this wrong) he is able to collect it gradually from normal persons or from "children of destiny" and the spell or item he gets is relevant to the wish he fulfill or miracles. Also did i say there was no system you heard me right NO SYSTEM. Aside from the mc i really like Aurora (sleeping beauty revised) and the path that she is taking i want to talk more about her but i have few more things to say. At first it confused me why there was a witch covenant but the witches they face were as strong as their OG but in the later chapter i was proven wrong the witches are getting stronger just not noticeable and if there is a single issue i have is the fact that the covenant has little members. It could have been larger with small time witches like the witch from hansel and gretel in it and have maleficant as a leader in the covenant like have the powerful witches at the top and weaker ones at the bottom also the fact that the covenant does not have a name and is secretive is weird since they pretty much destroy kingdoms if the author is reading this i have an idea for the name Walpurgisnacht is classy and fitting for a group of witches. All in all great writing, characters, plot, and development (i wanna say more but i dont want to tell the author how to write their own book especially since its this great already 10/10)
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its a good fanfic but i don't like it firstly the mc has infinite mana yet the only spells he cast are firebolt and fire ball it took 80 chapters just to get a lightning spell and then a few chapters after that he has time spells the progression is wack not only that but he experience zero mind when that is suppose to be impossible with his infinite mana it seem the author forgot about that. In conclusion this fanfic taught me one thing you could have all the magic in the world but if you are not smart enough to use it its useless but still a good fanfic . . oh also it surprises me how the mc has not destroyed the world yet if he had the create water spell he could flood the entire world or if he charged his black hole spell destroyed the universe
i am not trying to be a bummer but the fire spells are getting boring
it cool