Kingjp1

oh one more thing now that he is in atlas what about the clone that he made in the earlier chapters what happen to him

damn i wrote to much

ama be honest with you salem is a bad choose cause we all know her endgame plan besides she is more likely to kill mc on the spot if she gets summon or curse him also what would she even do in the team. the cuse user thing is interesting but the implication are catastrophic the world is already in a apocalyptic state and now you plan to beat it when its down, there is only 300 million or so people on remanant so introducing curse spirit would just declare the world as doomed since only curse users can see them. NOT TO SAY YOU CAN'T but don't introduce curse spirits and if you are going to summon a villian from rwby probably go with cinder or another antagonist from one of the books. i was thinking toji since it would be funny to see that he also have no aura but you are building a woman team so probably go with Machi Komacine from hxh her abilities match the the world of rwby also you said you wanted a financial adviser, she can also train him in using aura for magic training chose anyone if you plan to make him use it, no matter who you pick it going to be broken

to be honest there is kinda no need for advice since season 1 does not have anything that important

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yeah same its gotten to the point where i am thinking of writing my own fanfic where the mc is either a yokai or a person in the hero fact i have a whole head cannon right now

thats odd but maybe its because some authors took down their works i can remember a time where i would stumble across those fics every 4 fic

you innocent child don't go into the rabbit hole of dxd then

ai my ideas are being used

the one major issue with this fanfic is not that its slow pace but the fact that its too descriptive the author does not "show not tell" he "tell not show" so for half of the chapter all though long are just filled with unnecessary description like how the mc is not a skirt chaser then goes on a tangent on how he does not chase skirt