Kingjp1

And don't get me started on how hard the author is pushing Tanjiro to fight more demon where i am at right now is tanjiro went to rest at grandmas house for recover a house surrounded by wisteria flowers that should block demons ability of smell and hide the house pretty well and yet muzan was able to send a lower moon there if thats the case why has ain't he attack the demon slayer headquarters yet

I am going to be honest in this review. I enjoyed reading this fanfic, but that does not mean it is good. The MC, who is a demonic sword, does not act demonic in any meaningful way. You could argue that how he acted when he first met Tanjiro was demonic, but realistically any legendary sword would act that way to test its wielder. For the most part, he has been aiding Tanjiro in everything he does, to the point where it feels like Tanjiro is dependent on the sword. Tanjiro becoming dependent on the sword is another issue. Currently, Tanjiro is portrayed as if he cannot think for himself. The MC (the sword) tells Tanjiro what to do, how to do it, and so on. The MC is not really guiding him, but instead giving him direct answers to every problem that comes up. To me, this version of Tanjiro feels like he is nothing without the sword, which leads into the third issue. The MC (the sword) has the capability to permanently boost Tanjiro’s base strength by 30% every time they kill a demon. This has happened roughly 4–5 times from what I have read. However, I do not know if this is multiplicative or additive. Either way, he should be significantly stronger than before at the very least 150% even high if its multiplicative(271%), yet he is still portrayed as weaker than a Lower Moon who was able to pierce his heart almost instantly. Keep in mind, the MC (the sword) also has the ability to boost Tanjiro by filling his body with demonic energy, giving him a 50–100% increase in strength. This would mean he becomes 1.5–2× stronger during those moments, and yet he is still struggling. Even the original Tanjiro was able to face a Lower Moon who was a candidate for Upper Moon and almost defeat him. Yet this version of Tanjiro, who should theoretically be much stronger, is struggling against a Lower Moon who was basically cannon fodder in the original story that was only given screentime just to be killed. And what makes this feels even worst is that right now he is learning total concentrated breathing earlier than his OG counterpart so that another increase to his total strength compared to his OG who did not know TCB and fought a upper moon candidate This does not make sense. But still, I like it. Even though the power scaling and character portrayal feel inconsistent, the idea of an MC as a sword in a fanfic is new and interesting. Hopefully, as more authors try this concept, better versions of it will come out someday.

this is pretty much a copy and paste of a few other ff where the mc is in greece it does not give any substants it pretty much just the gods keep on sending him on quest over and over sometimes taking quest meant for other hero's the main girl is gonna be athena and you can basically see the plot from there i have basically read 4 other ff and they all follow the same premise the only difference is if the mc is a soon to be hero or random guy and the worst part of all is that this is suppose to be a FATE FF yet you could read it and no FATE terminology are ever used this is basically a ff of greek mythology instead of a FATE ff

just to make sure i am not bashing most chinse people the anime and light novel i have read never depicted him this way but idk about any other sources soo

you know i have come to realize that most chinse people when writing a ff make characters that where originally smart dumb or less intelligent so that the mc can be smart after all no one can be smarter than their self insert so they make ayanokouji this guy who only wants friends even though this is not how is character is in the anime manga or novel

i get that but would you say you "walked into a lamppost" or "crash into a lamppost" because 1 implies walking the other implies riding/driving

nah it did say he "crashed into a lamp post because he was looking at ass" so i assume he was either riding a bike or bicycle

SalveYing am begging you drop two more chapter this week and my life is yours

yow author am trying to join your patreon but its seems the team is reviewing your profile

okay so i reread it and it still does not make sense the author clearly states he got in a car accident and then got ran over by a truck so there are two possibilities either A. he was riding a bicycle or B. he was riding a bike and if it was B then who gives their child a bike i wonder if its just that my country does not allow this or yall country don't have much road safety for children