Pretty confused how blackbolt is close to firebolt if they are supposed to be brothers. Wouldn't lightningbolt or some other element have been better then black?

So in ch2 you pick right before hagrid shows up and get great muscles nu being to get sick etc.. well thats frankly bs. Its one thing to self insert its another to do this hot garbage

Why do you keep deleting your comments and your story? You replied to my comment and when i went to reply back you deleted everything

I see your first three inventions. The cd player is bit of a stretch but i can see it. The gameboy for me is unworkable though. Just to much fanwank for me. I enjiy reading this though :)

I do really like this story. The backstory. The insights. The world building. The personalities and the different takes on magic. This is great!

The chapter here and previous ones are both good to me :)

Bummer. Thanks for the reply

This is a great book and this is maybe my most liked of the chapters. Unfortunately the asterisks block what other site you said. Could you use spaces and spell it out for me please?

Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story. Good story.

I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story. I really like this story.

Twilight seriously needs to be in description. I wasted my time reading this hot garbage, not cool. Dont be that kind of auther. Seriously not cool.

First off very good and unique story. However there are ALOT and i mean alot of mispellings and such throughout the story. Like many many times you will have a word that needs and s and other time words haves an s where it shouldn't be there.

I really like this! However i am curious on why comments need to be a whole one hundred and forty characters long to post. Seems kinda dumb. That should probably be enough characters now.