ambicognome
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2020-10-20 JoinedBosnia & Herzegovina
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ambicognome3yrCommentedLove this process
Myran placed the metal into the furnace and started working the bellows. Even these menial tasks were done with experience and full concentration. This particular material was tricky, and Myran had to control the temperature just right if he wanted to smelt it to its best quality. The lump of blue, radiant rock and metal turned orange and red as the air drove the temperature of the furnace higher. As soon as the metal reached the ideal temperature, Myran used his tongs to retrieve the metal and started stroking it in one swift motion.- ambicognome3yrCommented
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Myran took the material from his workbench and placed it in the furnace carefully with his pair of tongs. Although Edgar had no idea what kind of material the lump of metal was, it looked quite extravagant. Edgar knew some part of Myran's past, but he was still sometimes surprised. He stared at the old man's back and a sense of warmth filled him. Or maybe it was just the furnace. - ambicognome3yrCommented
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It wasn't just the game, it was the feeling of progress. Of achievement. Like the efforts he put in were actually rewarded. That's the feeling he'd been missing his whole life. What he lost after being a kid. He understood that in real life that feeling is but a mere phantom. Something people chase their whole lives. Yet, the reward? Pain. Death. Misery. - ambicognome3yrCommented
Yes finally!!
Now, Edgar was finishing up his 200th firewood for the first time in the past six days. He had finished the quest with one day left. As he cut the final piece of firewood, he received the notification he had been waiting for. - ambicognome3yrCommented
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He wanted to be up and close and personal. He had pummeled horned rabbits with his bare hands these nights and loved the rush. Although he had suffered a few defeats, his constant training was allowing him to grow. - ambicognome3yrPosted
Beautiful word choices. ATLAS LIFE is a wonderful story with surprises and twists, but most importantly, i see a lot of real emotions. The protagonist struggles in real life but seems to be slowly finding himself in the video game. Maybe a lot of us can relate to Edgar’s loneliness, sadness, numbness, happiness... It sure is a journey. Daily update is exciting! There are always more surprises, twists and interesting events coming!!! I love it, can’t wait to see how the game evolves!!!!!!! One of the most interesting stories I’ve read!!!!! Thank you!!! [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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