Wow...awesome start! Cant wait to see where this takes you. Keep going.. Love the character development. First chapter is always what makes or breaks... I think you nailed it...!!!

Magnitude

Weakening arms

Reach,

Each other

Ceased,

Which

End,

Which

Fiery

Mid-length

Appearance,

No guesses as to his great strength ..

Any one to mourn...

Who dare to tread..

Sorrow will fall...

Sorrow falls..

Vain..