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You're right! It just could as easily had been Agnes or Rosetta as the main character instead of Maxi. They're complete and interesting characters as well, not just a supporting cast. The author clearly put a lot of thought into each and every character she created

Bruh, if you're just slamming your hands against the keyboard, why bother including any lines of dialogue? Just describe things instead.

Uhm...the first time he saw Airen he thought he was much older though?

I was offended by the ugly comment, too! So I'm next in line for the kitty shoulder massage.

Forgive me, my chemistry is woefully underutilized but -- metal gives water?

Great job, Riftan. Despite Maxi repeatedly saying she hates herself, attack her self-esteem some more, by all means. I've been through this. Being with someone who is emotionally stunted, who keeps everything inside and doesn't communicate what they're feeling or going through, only to lash out at the most convenient bystander when they can't keep their emotions in check anymore. It hurts to be that person in the splash zone of their emotions, and it hurts them because nothing gets resolved properly while they keep repeating that cycle of mounting tension then explosive release. They hurt and they can't fix it, so they try to make you hurt, too. I understand why Riftan is like this and I feel for him but right now, my heart goes out to Maxi most.

Came here to say this exact thing. Do not use your feelings to hold your partner hostage, that really isn't fair at all.

I agree with this sentiment more. Previously, any time Maxi tries to discuss something with Riftan, he vetos her decision or pressures her into agreeing with his side. That's why Maxi always ends up going behind his back when doing anything (although disguising herself as a cleric to follow him all the way to Eth Lene Castle is a bit much if you ask me). On the other hand, Riftan did not discuss any of his plans with Maxi either. Both these people need to learn how to be less stubborn and communicate better. But that's the theme of this story, isn't it? We don't get a story without conflict and the true mark of good writing is that all the conflict so far is believable and I can empathize with both MCs. We'll get a glimpse into Riftan's psyche in the portion from his POV and glean some understanding of why he is the way he is.

I like how this novel doesn't pretend that Riftan's obsessive and possessive behavior is healthy or romantic. Yes, Maxi did follow Riftan to battle because she couldn't bear being away from him but that was more to do with the fact that she was worried about him dying in battle. Riftan, on the other hand, just does not want to be separated from Maxi. Or at the very least, he just wants her to be in Anatol if he needs to be away from her. How is that fair, Riftan? Also, I like how Agnes is low key sarcastic about being born a woman when Riftan threatened to duel her. Oh, she just had to fight for every bit of freedom she's had all her life, no big deal, but being able to avoid getting challenged to a duel? How lucky!