With the added names from harry potter makes the stories seem less authentic To me.. Great story i love it But then the Names took away from it. As in the workd you crested with tgese characters was complicated snd deep abd amazing. then when the Names were added it kind if tajes you out of thAt world. mafe me Realize i was reading a FIction story instead if the mivue unfoldIng in my head....

May i ask why you are using names feom harry potter?

I love the story line but give me more detail!! Of everything !!❤️

See this! I just gifted the story: Sword

I agree once reading that part again