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This book has a great storyline and interesting characters. At first I wasntāt for the trupple, but it grew on me. What hasnāt grown on me is the amount of wasted words the author utilizes in their efforts of creating visual descriptions of the scenery and characters. Literally, in most chapters, the 1st few pages are repetitive descriptions of the ālush estateā or ābeauty of the mls. If they have to provide a detailed reminder every chapter of the aesthetic prowess of the characters & backdrop, do it in 1-2 paragraphs per chapter rather than repeating yourself multiple times wasting multiple pages of each chapter. A proofreader is definitely needed.
The author literally described and repeated the same scenerio 5 different times in not so different 5 different waysā¦ this book has a good storyline but needs a serious edit.
Omgā¦ how many times are their hair, eyes & aura going to be described??? We got a pretty good grasp of that early, early on in the book.
Agreedā¦. This does not make sense!
Han Han such a sly butth@@@ but u gotta luv him!š
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