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"Everything looked like anime and he really wondered what he looked like. " Wait... So did i get that right: Everything looks like an anime.... So,like drawn?... And 2D?.... Wow, that idea is really something new (at least for me :D). Cant even begin how weird seeing everything in anime style must be, but i love the concept :D (I just hope for the mc that he's into hentai, otherwise that would be a special kind of hell for him xD) Awesome chapter, keep up the good work^^
Thanks for the chapter^^ Just started it, and it looks quite promising so far^^ (maybe a bit of a generic start, but as the saying goes: never change a running system :D and it works well^^) Just 2 things that stood out to me: 1. Why call the system specifically the "touch corpse system" and not simply the "corpse System"? It seems like a weird specification and thus highlites particularly the "touch" aspect like it's the most important tag, while normally one would think that the focus should be more one the "corpse" aspect. (Also I thinks the shorter name "Corpse System" sounds better :D But that's just a personal preference^^) 2. In the description of the [Touch] ability, the sentence "Inanimate corpses will automatically drop upon death." doesnt really make sense to me o.O Doesnt everything drop an inanimate corpse when it dies? O.o or should it mean that when killing something it stays dead and cant become an undead (Stays an inanimate corpse)? (Site note: i'm not a native english speaker, so maybe take what i said with a grain of salt and i only read the first chapter, so maybe the stuff gets adressed later, in which case just ignore me xD) Nevertheless, its really nice, so please keep up the good work^^
Wow, that comment gives a kinda disturbing outlook of your personal character..... And you seem to miss the point the readers are "mad" about: it's not the fact that there is rape, that in itself would fit with the apocalyptic setting, what the other readers are disappointed in is that the mc basically raping then woman goes against the beforehand multiple times stated and heavily emphasized morals of the mc. It just doesnt fit to the character of mc that got shown to us.
Great another novel where the author is skipping to set up proper romance and just goes for the forced intercourse and followed mind****ery...I Dont get me wrong, i still gonna read more of it, because i enjoy the rest of the setup, but it's just sad to see authors crippling their own novels by skimping on a proper development of this quite important aspect for the characters.