Good job on the rewrite author-san. Loving both ethe mc and the voice. Pacing is good. Enjoying it very much. Definetly improved a lot and i love how i feel like im finding easter eggs from the og one. Do your best coz youre doing great. [img=recommend]

sometimes life is very mean: a person can spend days, weeks, months and years w/out feeling anything new. Then, when a door opens - a positive avalanche pours in. One moment, you have nothing, the next, you have more than you can cope with.. keep going