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You got to better with your pronouns. He, she, her and him. Who is really talking here in this dialog?
The real Qi Wuhi is gonna have to work overtime when he ascends.
That was a savage move! Grey is an animal!
You could have least eneded it after the reunion with Xia Fei and they returned home. That would have been a more settling end to the novel if you didn't want to continue it on. This is too good of a story to have a cliff hanger ending.