Reviewing after read first 10 chapters * The novel story is pretty quick going, but not missed any explanation about what is going on, and I like how the system interpreted, and for the MC development seems fine IMO. A very promising original novel, keep going and hope you deserve the best

fixed, actually, I thought it was okay, and Grammarly said so, but your suggestion makes it sounds better, thanks

I see I will check it out later, thanks for told me about my flaws, I will fix it!

I like how the story goings, a youngster have his soul transmigrated into a Chinese ruler, and still many promising futures ahead, I hope many martial arts scene is gonna be written in it. Keep it up, Author!!

Thank's, I love to hear you like my perspective view style, please keep supporting me, I will updates daily if I don't have any other business

Just like the title, the novel itself is beautifully made, with some slice of life in it, and good narrating over the situation around, I think about this after reading the first three chapters. Keep it up author

That's a nice goal of yours. My story still getting a long long way, so maybe 500 chapters still not enough. I just hope that I can finish this novel

i write to express my imagination and write it to make a story' that everybody can enjoy

Thanks for the review, this really motivate me to write more of my story, thank you. I try not to disappoint everyone and keep improving

Thank you for your review, I try not to disappoint my readers, keep up with the updates

A NIce novel, good plot, and System genre never get old, if this gets more polished this can be a masterpiece. To author keep updating and improving, I see the potential in your novel, and many rooms to improve.

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It's a nice novel, keep it up author, you can do better, and improve more, keep writing, and don't forget to read your reader critics. Keep the updates coming, and you will gonna saw more bright future ahead.

Hello, author here, before that, im very thankfull to new reader of me to read this small work of mine, please make sure to leave some comments, review, or maybe save it to your library. Im gonna try to update this book frequently, and i hope support from you guys, thank you very much, may peace be upon us all.

Honest Review# Cons : -Soo, first, the main character introduction is a bit meh for me, you need to increase the introduction from the MC so we can know what kind of dude is the MC. -Second, your writing need a bit improvement IMO, you need to decrease some words in each paragraph, because it makes your reader more comfortable reading it, and make sure if you want to go to dialogue, better make new paragraph. -Third, the story development a bit too fast i think? Pros : -By far, Original theme, except a bit edgy MC, but good background story, you need to widen the background too, the origin of those monsters. -Good description on how MC felt, maybe a little polished will be more great Hey, you can still improve tho, have fun writing

Hey thanks for the review, keep up with the new updates, gonna check your novel too later

On first, chapter i read the book, and its flawlessly intresting how you bring the character personality, after i read the rest of the chapters, im definitely love the story of this book, gonna wait for another updates of this chapter, great job author *thumbs up*, Fauric rocks. ** : Dont forget to add this book on your library