they're cheesy to but HE'S PERFECT was a topic I was given to write on and my very first attempt is LOVE WAS NOT THE REASON

I could use advise and suggestion from my friends/readers to upgrade. So thank you

I agree with you on the height thing. This is actual one of my first attempt at writing so I kinda went with the norm. I will do better to build a stronger character in another book. I've got two others on this app and one was a writing contest.

Thank you for you comment but it is too early to make such an assumption

Lower down there will be answers and explanations for present actions.

It was never meant as blackmail. She was too young for him to take her away and so was he. He did go to get help for her from her grandfather.

thank you. I will so some editing.

love the opening chapters but the story slowed down and then disappeared but now that this book has resurfaced, there's a buildup and I await to see where the characters are going

hi Rebecca! Sorry for now getting to mails but I was under the weather for a while. I am interested in your offer. I will message you soon!

thank you and I'm on a waiting list for an editor. maybe you could help point out some so that I could correct them in the meantime.

hi. first of all thank you for giving my book a chance! Chubbs is Adian's nickname for his sister!

Yea. imagination is a good thing. A crazy one at that

hi Ava, thank you for this opportunity and yes, I would like to publish with you. I will forward my inform to you. Thank you again!

she started strong and I hope she remains that way

hi. jess is being manipulate by Logan's grandfather so has had ulterior motives from the beginning but it's now unraveling

spolier, but yes. His grandfather from Scottish roots.

very..

there was a threat. a threat that was successful but...

hope to unfold their hidden problems

hope to unfold their hidden problems