Overall, its ok. There is nothing special about the characters or world but I don't see any major flaws either. Story so far is the overpowered cautious MC with a generic harem. If your looking for a book to pass the time, you could do worse.

An overall good story that provides an interesting world, great characters and an intriguing plot. However, after 40 chapters the story suffers greatly from a translation that looks like it was copy-paste from a bad app.

I really want to see a reversal of Iris' plan soon because this development is making me uncomfortable.

I wonder who the lucky son of a botch that bets on the girls is going to be, other than Master.

While the background does have a lot of western fantasy, the story does not suffer from it at all. Every chapter is well written and descriptive without being boring, no matter the content. The characters are nice and work well with the story. This story is impeccable. Keep up the good work.

Thats not how you say "a shot ton of torture and murder"

This should be the OG Waifu wars.

This is going to be very painful for most of the people here.

Its a great call back.

I think the best title for this arc is "A Journey of a Thousand Face Slaps"

There really won't be a difference between the to Suns after this.

I wonder when the "ignore them" defense system will come back online cause Master really needs it.

Which domains do you think they will control?

Its the only women Lin attracts.

Probably Iris interfering in some way or because Lin didn't get the full scope of his powers yet.

The classic joke, how I've missed it.

how wonder how end feels about Luna calling Lin husband

I think you meant Papa author

I hate this kind of mentality the most. I am glad it was just a set up.

Overall, the story presents an interesting world with great characters and logical story development. While some parts of the story can feel either forced or had pacing issues, it never was a major issue for me.