dedeper

I feel these worked better when they were author comments. Just my opinion.

This one, your honor.

*Men should*

Horn not Honor

Freya not Kayla

Another MTL, where a fourth grader could do a better job editing. When the MC apparently "upgrades the fireball spell to the fireball spell". You give up hope that the quality will get any better later on in the book.

This story in the later stages, could easily have the children replaced by Ash going "Pickachu I choose you" or "Go go gadget daddy" for the story development. If you want to read a slice of life with no change this is the book for you.

Honestly, the MTL is terrible. If I could read more than one of every four lines without being confused either about what is being said or who is saying it, this could be a good novel. When you have two characters one male and one female talking about the male's wife(ch.7), and you cannot even figure out who is talking or who's wife the wife actually is. It just implies a major lack of editing.

*Autumn*

Good book, you have to ignore the insane amount of nationalism and the immense need for an editor. Translation quality is rough and as you get deeper you can obviously see the MTL quality drop even more.