Yeah klasik novel.... We know.

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and you make too many mysteries .... in the first world the mystery of his birth and about his power he did not know and you added another mystery in the 2nd world.. oh and also what happened during his meeting with iriana the explanation was too short (1 chapter that's only 10% of that chapter) compared to the sex scene with 2 unclear women with 3 more chapters

The more you read, the more confused you become. I don't have a problem with crossovers, but how can you combine material peak with saint seiya and SMNT/MT in my opinion it's too forced if matreil peak is combined with 3 worlds it's not very suitable.

And than. This book name hentai system... And god say I don't like him sex every time. This idiot. What do you want with this system

Isn't this a hentai system then what's the problem with that skill? just limit its ability does not need to be removed. ah spoil the story

writing about the world of naruto just to attract the interest of readers. but the contents of the oc character are all garbage. DROPS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????!!!!!!!

Pergi ke dunia Naruto dengan tema harem yg isi oc semua sampah

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the story is getting more and more unclear. JUST STOP WRITING ID_000_T_SSSSSS

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him. sorry my english is very bad for translating from Indonesian to English so I used a translator application. because there is always something wrong in translating it

my bad. I mean "him'😁

thanks for the attention, i will try to fix it. I am also studying English because English is not the language I use every day. I will reduce the mistakes. thank you for the comment😁

Lanjut bro!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ++++++!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ++((!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (! (!!!!!!!!