Robert_Peavey

These must be trained birds b'cuz the untrained bird cost 15 gp in chapter 17.

Thanks. I jump from Novel to Novel at times and I feel like a jerk when I write negative things. I must have assumed that he was aware of the wardens' death.

I'm happy he decided to go and kill that weakened wizard. It's the perfect opportunity, as we hear him say it, and the mc is at his peak.

With his ability to manipulate metal (like Magneto), he could have stopped the bullet. That's with the thought that he has the insight, strength and ability.

Yet he sat on his hands and made no attempt to inform his clients about the recent personnel changes and to beware deception. Future Mob Boss?..not seeing it yet...

Unless this dude has a family or even someone he is committed too, then that statement by the queen was stupid. He could simply switch sides and cause all kinds of problems.

I have not written a Novel so it's easy to be a critic. Yet in the last chapter, the Warden had died. Why are we being fed filler for an action that has already happened?

Sounds sus!

I respect that you aren't going to write your book the way the readers want and that it's your way or the highway! That's exactly how it should be!

Someone should look into the woman's past. See where she really comes from and if her "memory" is real or a Nephilim ploy to get rid of another strong competitor for the Earth faction.