Dreyerboys

Elden Ring

Yeah, this is much better. Thank you, author. Now we can see a real relationship develop and how they work through these tough times together.

Author, please don’t go down the cheating angle. You’ll 100% ruin the story. I don’t care if Maki comes to accept it. You’re just turning your MC into the bad guy but trying to make it seem like he’s the good guy. You’re just going to kill a great story if you do this. At least have him sit down with Maki and talk it out with her. Normally I think it’s cringe to announce when you’re dropping a novel on here, but I think for this it’s justified if you continue down this route.

I mean, I don't think it really matters lol. At the end of the day, they're both essentially a type of magic. Personally, I like the cultivation power system more as you can do whatever you want with the realms of power so long as you add some logic behind it. But Magic would also be cool. Although I like the Cultivation Power system, I also want to see the MC explore his own power system by himself. I mean, if the MC goes the Cultivation route, you'll have to actively try to make it NOT go down the traditional garbage cultivation novel route(People discover MCs talent->everyone wants him as a disciple->He picks some random dude/woman->they teach him a technique->Now his entire path is limited to this one thing that someone else decided for him->He then follows their every word for who knows how long.) In all these "limitless potential" stories, whenever the MC learns some technique from a Master, it almost always gets replaced or completely changed over time due to its limitations. I always want my Cultivation MCs to explore their own path and create their own techniques. I mean, he basically already has infinite time right? No reason to rush things. You can take the time to flesh out a personalized cultivation power system, all while exploring the world and his minecraft powers. From that point of view, I'd much rather him figure out everything on his own in the Magic route(since he doesn't have a choice other than to explore it himself). However, if you stick with that philosophy while going down the cultivation route, I'd prefer that.

Keep it up, Author. You’re doing great.

The Kingdom of Solace, that is.

To put it into perspective, it’s a bit smaller than South Korea.

I mean, the US, China, and Canada are all almost 10 million square kilometers. The top 30 largest countries are all over 1 million. And the surface of Earth is over 500 million square kilometers. Unless this is a radius/diameter of 10 million kilometers, this really isn’t all that crazy.

Bro. Who cares… Please, author. You have something decent going, but it’s little moments like this that completely break the character. It doesn’t make him more personable or relatable. It’s just cringe and annoying.

Please, author. Stop doing this. It’s not funny. It makes no sense. And it does more harm to your story than almost anything else you’ve written. You don’t even have to come up with a reason. Just stop doing it, ignore it. We don’t want to see this character anymore. I’m sure the readers will be happier if she just never comes up again.