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After reading 120 Chapters: Writing Quality 4/5, has some minor but noticeable mistakes. Story Development 5/5, I believe the MC progresses finely and it makes me feel that greed to see him get stronger. Character Design 4/5, no bad characters but there isnt one I find particularly interesting (So far), I feel they could have more personality but it isn't really a problem for me. World Background 3/5, this is my only personal critique. The world is great but it's all things we've seen a bunch of times. Overall I say the novel is a very good 8/10, it just needs something unique about the world, magic system, or characters that makes it stand out from other novels to make it top tier, but it does do a really good job on the elements of the story that it has from the power system to the story and more.