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The abilities that the group developed would be similar to what we usually see in super soldiers, like regeneration, greater resistance and super strength, perhaps night vision and so on, because if so, the story will be very dynamic if it slowly introduces new variants of the dead. alive
a cool chapter but it was quite quick, it could have described more of the fights and the reaction of the nobles and people of Ned Stark's new force, it would have been much better, apart from that excellent chapter
Espero que não seja um imenso Harém já que mesmo que esse mundo siga um pouco a lógica hentai não faz muito sentido algo assim, além do mais por favor não coloque super poderes para o MC apenas a capacidade de aumentar estáticas e se tornar tipo um Bruce li ou a força de um bodybuilder já está bom
Uma ótima história continue o bom trabalho, gosto de ver como o MC está lentamente construindo seu próprio reino de forma gradual, também gosto de como os povos livres são retratados e de como o MC não tenta simplesmente fazer todos pensarem como se fosse o século 21
I love the story but I believe the author gave the MC a lot of power so I don't make much sense, he's basically Superman, if weaknesses and me getting stronger by the minute, as if his very presence would destroy a planet what in itself is already too much unless it was in the Dragon Ball universe. (I hope you understand, I used Google translator to write)
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they are strong, even differentiated between other chapters of space marines but they are not invincible, i am sure that some imperial knights, demonic princes and a fleet of tyranids can easily finish the chapter in its full childhood according to these advices i think its chapter balanced Enough to pioneer the universe, but I would prefer that they had a solar system at their base, with wild worlds and feusal peoples from which to recruit most of their initiates. remembering that I used Google translator to write this review, so forgive me for any mistakes
It does a bit of realm building, like the group starts building and rebuilding various parts of the prison creating a real Post Apocalyptic fortress, Strategies to survive and maybe even the pregnancy of some women making the group have to readjust with the birth of children in the apocalypse
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author I really like your story but you post a lot of ads and warnings kind of when I think it's a new chapter it's just you answering or talking about something you consider important, it would be easier for all your fans if you made a disagreement and there post your ads leaves a warning chapter when it's important type: Guys I'm not posting day xxx, something like that. i'm using google translator sorry if there is any english error. I make my support clear and I would like to say that this is one of the best stories made by fans of the DC universe. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the next chapter