Majesty_Wolf

After reading 100 or so im well and truly sick of this the whole root bone thing is just preposterous This novel has so many pot holes I think the river is turning into a sea If low grade root bone absolutely can’t reach hiigher realms wth don’t any master just kidnap and torture the secrets out of him The author keeps repeating the same dam sentence again n again either he thinks the reader are elementary school kids or he is padding word counts

Haha 😂 very funny don’t ye know who’s the proganist

Tftc

Dings thousand faces

I still feel and it’s still missing some explanations but it’s sever times better than the previous version £££££££££!!!!!!!!£££!£££!££££££££££££

Thanks for the edited chaps

It could used more detailed action—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-—————————————————

Waiting for some act ion