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Excellent writing! By far one of my favorite HP novels. You brought a whole new aspect to HP too which makes it even better. Keep up the great writing!

This rewrite is so much better for the flow of the story. Great job!

Amazing story so far, keep up the great work! By far the best teen wolf story I've read so far. 5/5

Really love the story so far! Keep up the great work! Although the English isn't the greatest, It really doesn't take too much away from the story. 5/5

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Story is great so far, I just hope you continue the story. It gets really old when new good stories come out and stop after like 5-10 chapters.

The Glock 17 doesn't have a normal safety... It's a trigger safety...

So wait, did he just get harry potter's wand?...

Super confused as to why the king wouldn't be staying in the palace, but instead staying in a mansion. Was this mentioned somewhere and I missed it?

One of the best GOT stories I have read so far. It's taking a completely different angle into the world but working it's way back into the original plot sort of. Keep up the great work Author!