not bad but I just hope u make the cultivation levels feel strong and not just names like a bit in RMJI which really makes leap frog stand out.U already did a good job of showing cultivation as hard
I usually view webnovel reviews as bull but take it from a guy who reads mtl.And real novels this thing can go places as long as the author keeps good grammar, engaging story and respects our intelligence so give it a try
author better change the name of the book and make it clear because this is about a dude called lonely and the adventures of friendship.No Street kid is this naive