Hassan_Ahmad_3827

Umm... btw the story is good but try to make the story look like that its now gonna happens likewise in simple words i wanna say this that work on that part of your story which can create a image on the readers mind. This would make your novel more ridiculous and hence more readers would be attractive towards. By the way keep it up... Aisay hi shugul mela rakhao Shugul ka shugul kaam ka kaam Parho na bs 24 ghantay yehi kaam kartay raho crore patti ban jao gay😂😂😂😂

A very nice novel. Just try to put some imagination thought words and use some little pictures so that public can feel the reality of the story any ways keep working you are doing a very good work keep trying hard one day youll reach to the top Regards, Hassan ahmed🙂